Friday, 19 January 2018

1st draft without lyrics


This is the first edit we have without the lyrics, this version is longer than the lyrics version as we had more time to focus on the footage. we are all happy with this as a first draft.

we all like how the shots are effective and fit the lyrics, we feel that the relationship is easily established within the 1st draft. the two contrasting feelings and emotions are shown through the juxtaposing shots of Jade and Alex then Alex on his own, this fits in with the juxtaposing lyrics

there is still more to be improved though, getting more footage is definetley a big part for us to be capable for filling the song. the typography at the start needs to be changed

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